wowie sounds nice! guess at some point that very chill melody really just doesn't fit the hellish drumkit in the background, and sometimes the drumkit sounds more like random sounds rather than something with an actual structure. great stuff, still, and keep up the great work!

Could've been a lot better. you should definitely study song structure and get at least a tiny little bit of knowledge about harmony and how melodies work with chords, and how chords are made in general.
It's nice you're trying new stuff out, though

Could've had more details, could've been less repetitive. It gave me some Flowers of Antimony vibes, especially at the end.
Goodjob!